Do you remember that night?
The one where it felt so right.
Another place and time.
A different scene, another rhyme.
We could have been anyone, and everyone.
A brand new crowd.
A place to reinvent the world.
But the time passed by.
That day forgotten in new dreams.
Flooded with thoughts of old screams.
Past and present collide.
A battle of the wits.
Where no one could survive.
Do you remember that night?
The last time we really felt alive.
A contest entry
- A Contest For Teens by xTomorrowx.
750 points, ended February 3, 2008, 50 entries
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Comments
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This flows quite well and it's a good story, I really enjoyed reading this...
Great write, thanks for entering and good luck!
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