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Final Seconds

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It really is quite simple,
the last three hours of my life.
Would be near my family,
praying together without strife.

There is nothing else I'd do,
my regrets have long gone.
I'd be with my family,
praising the Lord with a song.

Together sharing our wonderment,
of what Heaven will be like.
Holding hands with family,
looking forward to our flight.

The time would just drag on,
although I'd wish for it to fly.
Soon all of my family,
will join together in the sky.

Now in the final seconds,
as we look up with waiting hearts.
Oh what a wonderful feeling,
when our spirits finally depart.

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Written October 26th, 2003

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  • leannewales
    October 27, 2003
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    really nice Sam....a very calm and composed attitude...nice flow and rhythm.....good luck and thankyou for entering....leanne xxx