Your more than just a girl to me
You know we were ment to be
Your closer to me then you know
So I hope you never go
I'll tell you I love you every time I can
Because when I saw you a new love began
I didn't know what I needed in life
For everyday I carried a knife
My life was dark and grim in hard times
So this is why I write these rymes
To say I love you with all my heart
And glad to say we made a start
your all i'll ever want and need
to help me with my life succeed
you brought me your love and ended the pain
for when i saw you my anger was slain
A contest entry
- My Contest! by lemonhead.
520 points, ended January 12, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i don't care what you think
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awh i like it james. ha ha nice write
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i like it!! nice rhyming!! later gaiter
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the rhyming is awesome. it didn't sound forced at all. great job! keep writing, you're great at it. =]
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It is a good piece , whether you care or not!! Good job
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Whether you care or not what others think about it, it was very well done. Your ryming and rythem makes the piece flow like a song. It was beautiful, well done
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