He's
sailing
handsomely
on pristine bays
in my lucid dreams
singing gleefully a song
tempts his pen to come along.
Ripples of waters
echo his mate
who is not
really
here.
~
The
glacier
formations
amidst the bay
do float peacefully.
They're masterpieces of time
determined movement sublime.
The sun's touch does melt
those ice wonders
back to it's
dawning
form.
~
A
dance so
serene starts.
Upon winds breath
the clouds waltz away.
Under the moon's beaming light
thunder is the tune tonight.
The wind settles down
and now clouds drift
with a dream
in the
sky.
Author notes
He's
sailing
handsomely
on pristine bays
in my lucid dreams
singing gleefully a song
tempts his pen to come along.
Ripples of waters
echo his mate
who is not
really
here.
~
The
glacier
formations
amidst the bay
do float peacefully.
They're masterpieces of time
determined movement sublime.
The sun's touch does melt
those ice wonders
back to it's
dawning
form.
~
A
dance so
serene starts.
Upon winds breath
the clouds waltz away.
Under the moon's beaming light
thunder is the tune tonight.
The wind settles down
and now clouds drift
with a dream
in the
sky.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3659468
C.L.G.
132 syllbs ArkBears form *Arkquain String*
picture i don't know where it came from.
This form was designed by Arkbear if you use give him credit
Syllable count:
1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1break 1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1break
1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1
Most important..>>>.......Every ( 7 ) Syllable Line,
MUST Rhyme with each other, within their own Arkquain
RedwingSpirit
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A contest entry
- *Poetry Formed XXII* by Arkbear.
1050 points, ended December 20, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For those who run contests II Invite Only by penman.
1850 points, ended January 5, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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625 points, ended January 13, 2008, 88 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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you did a really nice job with the form
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wow nice piece, great imagery, even with such a tough form.
bravo my friend.
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Nicely done.Congratulations with the Trophies won!
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It's a really nice piece, well done with the form. Forms can be sooo tricky.
Keep up the awesome work!
--Katie. -
and its lovely :)
this is beautiful >>> -
Wow! You've written a ton since I last read your work, Cara.
You did an amazing job with Arkbear's form. I absolutely loved the visual in this. Bravo! My computer has been a little possessed lately by viruses, but I'll try to read more of your work whenever it's not freezing up on me.
Don
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