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Bronze, HM - An Orchestrated Dream - Arkquain String

He's
sailing
handsomely
on pristine bays
in my lucid dreams
singing gleefully a song
tempts his pen to come along.
Ripples of waters
echo his mate
who is not
really
here.
~
The
glacier
formations
amidst the bay
do float peacefully.
They're masterpieces of time
determined movement sublime.
The sun's touch does melt
those ice wonders
back to it's
dawning
form.
~
A
dance so
serene starts. 
Upon winds breath 
the clouds waltz away. 
Under the moon's beaming light 
thunder is the tune tonight. 
The wind settles down 
and now clouds drift 
with a dream
in the
sky.

Author notes

He's
sailing
handsomely
on pristine bays
in my lucid dreams
singing gleefully a song
tempts his pen to come along.
Ripples of waters
echo his mate
who is not
really
here.
~
The
glacier
formations
amidst the bay
do float peacefully.
They're masterpieces of time
determined movement sublime.
The sun's touch does melt
those ice wonders
back to it's
dawning
form.
~
A
dance so
serene starts.
Upon winds breath
the clouds waltz away.
Under the moon's beaming light
thunder is the tune tonight.
The wind settles down
and now clouds drift
with a dream
in the
sky.


http://allpoetry.com/poem/3659468
C.L.G.





132 syllbs ArkBears form *Arkquain String*
picture i don't know where it came from.
This form was designed by Arkbear if you use give him credit

Syllable count:
1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1break 1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1break
1-2-3-4-5-7-7-5-4-3-2-1
Most important..>>>.......Every ( 7 ) Syllable Line,
MUST Rhyme with each other, within their own Arkquain

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Comments

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  • writeonhorses
    October 10
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    you did a really nice job with the form


  • tranmere
    October 9

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    wow nice piece, great imagery, even with such a tough form.

    bravo my friend.


  • who iam
    October 9
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    Nicely done.Congratulations with the Trophies won!

  • It's a really nice piece, well done with the form. Forms can be sooo tricky.
    Keep up the awesome work!
    --Katie.


  • wave1080
    October 9
    Edit | Reply

    and its lovely :)

    this is beautiful >>>


  • Knight70 silver member
    July 8

    Edit | Reply

    Wow! You've written a ton since I last read your work, Cara.

    You did an amazing job with Arkbear's form. I absolutely loved the visual in this. Bravo! My computer has been a little possessed lately by viruses, but I'll try to read more of your work whenever it's not freezing up on me.

    Don

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