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Testing

Testing testing one two three
Testing her sexuality
Is she straight or is she gay?
Let's try by picking up a stray
A lonely one, with too much trust
She never learned how to adjust
A girl you say, for her to kiss?
She felt that something was amiss
The passion never was quite right
It never did seem to excite
Well that's ok, it was a test
It's not like she's become obsessed
To love a straight girl, how divine
She dated one, the concubine
It was never really serious
She must have been delirious!
To fall in love so unrequited
She knew along she was just pitted
An apple core among the trash
A smoke half-smoked, not fully ash
Just used a little and thrown away
It wasn't meant to lead astray
A wonder she's not been today
The rumor is she's gone to away
A broken heart too much for her?
An emo kid, it's said, for sure
She killed herself? You tell a lie!
With not a thought to say goodbye
How selfish, cruel and just plain mean
To die for her is just obscene

Author notes

It's not personal, never dated a straight girl. But one of my friends had a straight girl ask her out as an experiment and made me think.

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  • scottles
    December 7, 2007
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    ah

    its written really well i really love it, and those ppl sound like assholes


  • Onion Boy
    December 6, 2007

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    The rhythm faltered in one line in particular, (line 25?)'the rumor is she's gone to away' but maybe I just wasn't reading it right. I enjoy your ability to take an idea and run with it, tell a whole story. Good job.


  • Skawe
    December 1, 2007

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    that girl didn't really commit suicide, did she?
    anywho, i like the message. And whoever performs 'experiments' like that, are assholes...