I feel like I'm the only one trying to make sacrifices in this relationship,
I work hard to please you,love you,take care of you, and I feel you need me!
But all I get,all I see,is my heart and hand reaching for you as you turn away
Have I not been the perfect friend?!The Perfect Lover?Am I not as sweet as a rose.
The Rose I gave you on the night we walked in the garden sweltering with sweet delight. Romance took us over into the starlit night and I knew then you loved me...
Or so I thought...but now Our love is like that rose.It's still beautiful to me and sweet,but the thorn has pricked me. And Sacrifices have not gone unforgotten.I'll give you one last chance to show me your love and devotion! This is my last SACRIFICE FOR YOU AND OUR LOVE! This is the last Blood from a rose and it's spilling in your court.
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A contest entry
- Sweet Kisses at Dusk by DevinCora.
1050 points, ended January 23, 2008, 16 entries
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I like the last part of blood rose in court.
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Thak you for entering....and I am sorry it took me so long to get back to you on this!!!!! Great write, really I love your comparison!!!!! Its perfect, thank you for entering and good luck to you!!!!
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Awww so deep and very touching here, the deep love and everything, just so true, how hard it is sometimes to keep on bleeding and bleeding...
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wow, no soft petal here, nor should there be,
love is a mutaul understanding and sharing, selfishness begats loneliness, and I can see that bloody rose in the court wherehe once courted you but now is way out of bounds, hope it all works out to the good. ~Artis
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