One more time, give me more I like it.
No a second time, I want it, I hate it.
Baby baby, You know you want me to hate it.
You broke my heart, I love it.
Baby baby, One more time for it.
Oh yes, You said this was not right , our relationship.
So break my heart again, I think it is right.
Everyone says it's not right, they say.
I say I don't see it.
I say one more time, we can make it right. Not wrong.
Too long, you said it was not right.
One more time.
Author notes
Britney Spears "baby one more time" Prompt choose a song and write a horrible crap poem about it. I figured this would be fun.
A contest entry
- The Runs -- A Rounds Contest for Crap Poetry (Open to Prewrites) by zach egide.
925 points, ended December 3, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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This is pretty bad, LOL
and we had another entrant in the contest (of four entries) use this song (or another Britney song, at least)
Thanks for sharing, and good luck) -
sorry on my 1st comment
I pushed enter in the middle of writing. LOL! What I was gonna say is "I guess you are familiar w/ Britney- she's quite the tabloid princes!LOL! Poor chick can't get out of her own way. But anyways good luck in the contest -
cool
Good Luck!
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Very Nice!
Much better that the first one!
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Thank you I agree :-)
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