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School to moi..

school
is the best
i love it so much
its never a pest
it may be hard
and it may be challenging
but in the end
the bells may be ringing
my teacher says
i will move on
the graduation
will be on the lawn
every week
goes by so quickly
it makes me smile,
daily
well got to go do more homework
talk to you later! or as they say,
see you later,
alligator

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  • catz Moderators member
    December 9, 2007

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    What a delightful and refreshing write, kitty-love. I'm glad you love school and are doing your homework... and that you're taking time to write poetry as well. Keep doing it all

    Very nice expression in this happy piece

    Dee