Shimmer silver light
amassed with icy feeling.
Six points to an end.
In a list
A contest entry
- Winter Haiku by Swan song.
480 points, ended December 5, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now, I could really go for some snow.
I think I remember commenting on this one some time ago, but that's okay. Washington State has had some very unusual heat this past week. We got blasted with anywhere between 108 and 112 degrees a few days ago. That's so far past the 85 or 90 degree days we usually get in the summer. All of us in Washington would be dancing in the streets today if it snowed in July. At least, I would. Anyway, I enjoyed the image you penned here, Pamela. Snowflakes are such perfect subjects for winter haiku.
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Thank you again Don. I am pleased for your words here. ~Pamela
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beautiful! So delicate just like a snowflake, Congrats on the honorable mention. It was well deserved
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Thank you most kindly. ~Pamela
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This haiku definately has a "frosty" feel to it. The background you have chosen brings an extra dimention to your work... especially the "six points to an end" this is great!
Katie
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Thank you very much for such kind words. Most appreciated. ~Pamela
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Good Haiku Pamela. Worded perfectly to describe a snowflake. Great job thanks for sharing and congrats on the HM
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Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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This is a very deep haiku and after reading it several times I felt the sensation of sliding on ice it has a bit of magic to it I do not know if it was meant to be that way or not but that was my take Very good
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Swan Song
Jeff, thank you for such an amazing comment and an HM in your contest. I appreciate both very much. Great contest! ~Pamela
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Speaking from an Alaskan childhood, you really packed this 'lil icebox full of meaning. Great Job!
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paulcreates
Thank you so much. Must be that Northern Minnesota blood coming out.
I appreciate your kind words very much. Thank you. ~Pamela
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Nicely done, a lovely Winter Haiku along with the lovely winter border pains a lovely picture.
Best wishes,
Evan
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ebpoetry
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. ~Pamela
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GORGEOUS haiku...
I just love this haiku! The background for this one is fantastic, too. I looked up some ice crystal photos recently. It's amazing how perfect they are, not to mention unique. I was surprised to find out that they aren't as symmetrical as I thought. Don
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Don
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am so pleased you enjoyed this Haiku. ~Pamela
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This is so creative--love the haiku with the wonderful images reflected in the background. And the "six points to an end" last line brought the infamous ahhha feeling to the haiku. Good luck in the contest!
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maggiejamespoet
Thank you so much. I am so pleased that you found the ahhha moment. Thank you! ~Pamela
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that last line was awesome! great haiku... is it snowing there, perchance???
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going nowhere
Thank you my friend. I am pleased for your comment on this haiku. ~Pamela
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A beautiful haiku and I love how it was presented. You have created perfection here my friend. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the comp
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In Too Deep1
Thank you for such kind words on this haiku. I am pleased you enjoyed it. ~Pamela
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Excellent
what a beautiful winter haiku. Best of luck in the contest.
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penman
Thank you so much for your kind words. I am so pleased you enjoyed this Haiku. ~Pamela
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burr
Winter is cold but this background is beautiful. Winter is a beautiful season. Snow on the trees makes the winter beautiful. -
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Candy6
Thank you so much. I am so pleased you enjoyed this winter haiku. Thank you. ~Pamela
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A delicate display of infinite wonder.
Best to you with this little gem. Blue
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Blue
Thank you so much for your wonderful words on this Haiku and congratulations on the GOLD. Nice work, as I expected. ~Pamela
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Such a lovely snowflake --- very vivid picture in words. Good luck in this contest, my Friend.
Lady D
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Lady D
Ahhh, my friend. Such wonderful words from you. I am so pleased you enjoyed this winter haiku. Thank you. ~Pamela
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