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Summer Sun

Sun is beating down
On this little town

Children outside playing
Sprinklers are spraying

Father's mowing the grass
Mother's on her ass

Laying by the fan
She's gettin' a tan

Everyone's gettin' cooled
In their big old pools

Dogs are barking loudly
Prancing around proudly

I wish it would rain
This heat is just INSANE!

I can't wait 'till winter!
Take away this pain

Author notes

A loverly summer poem I write when I was about 9 or 10

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  • happy kitty kat
    February 8, 2008
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    k


  • Ali - Pie
    January 19, 2008
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    Unique poem. I love it, I hate summer time just for this reason! Too Hot! lol
    awesome poem