*whispers* Good morning sweetheart
No, you stay, I’ll get it.
It’s ok, I don’t mind.
~~~~Thank you.~~~~
Oh, great choice.
No, you look marvelous in that.
Can I pick you up?
:::Creative gifts:::
Tiny note
~~~~Your welcome.~~~~
Let’s go visit your parents.
DDDDDDD Doors opened. DDDDDDDD
I wrote this just for you.
Are those new ear rings?
..and they should be proud to have you too.
..........Flowers!
They’re your favorite kind.
Honey, I’m home…
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A contest entry
- Naughty Guys ..... Adults only by Riftkin.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Boffo!
It's a blast to come upon a poem that hasn't been written before.
This works beautifully, too.
Damned urbane, I'd say.
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this is soft and sweet
you sure have showed the love
and the softer side of a man
this is not a naughty guy
but an angel here on Earth
Thank you.
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