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Frostbitten by fire

A corpse can warm your feet on the cold nights
cramming toes in between the ribcage
while the skull serves as a radiator
for frostbitten fingers,
it all just proves you shouldn't kill in the cold.

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  • Exodus gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    *sigh* What can I ever say about your poetry that doesn't get repetitive after the fourth or fifth "wow"?
    You have a style of writing that is malleable but not breakable, there is always that hint of you in each piece, and I love it Thanks hun.