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The Night

Fall out boy concert took forever to come
And left within a second
With only lyrics and faces
Still echoing through my head
To the tune of the ringing in my ears.
Don't ask why I'm writing things this way,
Full sentances can't form
For half my brain is asleep.
Half an hour in the train station
With a bottle of water
And a cold metal seat
And one last video
Was heaven on earth.
Though the cold froze our hands
And kept us awake
I still have to say
There was never anything better.

Author notes

this is actually a myspace journal entry that, after looking at it about a month after I wrote it, I realized could very well fit in with the other crap i have up here.

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  • scarlett07
    February 13, 2008

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    Liked the premise of the poem, Fallout Boy is a really really great band. Favorite lines had to be"With only lyrics and faces
    Still echoing through my head"