1
twittering leaves-
red gold glory of living
before the demise.
2
dancing gold
on afternoon breeze;
so carefree.
3
velvet breezes turn
to wind's steel spiked breaths;
winter's first words.
Author notes
not strict 5 7 5, focused more on topic, flow and pauses here. "modern" haiku, if you will.
dance with me, on this, my moment of complete vulnerability.
Comments
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These are very good and express the feel of Autumn so beautifully.I have read them over and over still can't choose one over the other.
I love Haikus have a few myself but still learning.
Keep on writing you have real tallent.
ED.
Thank you for the nice comment on " A KING IS BORN"
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