Now time for small talk
we both know why your here
so drop the pretense
step into my arms
tell me what you want to hear
Slip out of that black dress
before I rip it away
Just like me you came to play
Show me yours, I'll show you mine
and make the pieces fit.
I will be your lover toy
to fondle rock and ride
I'm the high priced gigilo
who's classified you answered
I'm your male for hire.
But time is money lady
put the cash on the table.
If you can afford me,
I'll stay all night in your stable
Drop the pretense, lusty one
We know why you called
A contest entry
- Naughty Guys ..... Adults only by Riftkin.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sounds like you have return with a bang,
and that is not so bad, you are one of the
naughty ones I'll give you that.
Thank you for entering
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Rift, I'm not that naughty unless asked ot be so. And then you'll always get more than you asked for. Thanks for the honorable
Joe
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No need for pretense when the passions and desires are riding high
Wishing you all the very best in this contest! -
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Angel, tis was spur of the moment when I saw the pic and read it was Rift's contest. In many ways I am a gigilo with words--just not paid for the service which is befitting. I love to give it away for free!!
Joe
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I'm sure the Lady would willingly fork out the cash for such an offer. Best wishes in the contest my friend.
Margaret
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Margaret, might be nice to get paid but my luck she'd be ugly
Joe lol
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good luck in the contest
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Dacrness, I need all the luck I can get. Thank you sir
Joe
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Awesome job baby!
That Satyr is back! And smoother and than ever!
Keep up the amazing hot writes!
Your AP wife,
L-R-P
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L-R-P, you ain't seen nothing yet. My AP bride and I have some makin's up to do
Joe -
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yes we do baby! i cant wait!
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Ching ching,,,,hear the cash sing? LOL A well compose poem for it feels as if you are speaking directly to the reader. Your style has desirous affect upon anyone whom should stumble upon this little black dress poem.
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so Ms Freedom, slip into your slinky black dress and give me a call
Joe
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love it!
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Lady is MUCH better!! LOVE IT!
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Nice, hot, and well dirty! lol as always love to read.
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My sweet Joy, naughty is always nice
Joe
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Beautiful. (Loose the word baby and it will be perfect!) I thought this had amazing word choice and beautiful imagery. The background was kinda lame and not keeping with the poem's lovely vibe. Good luck in the contest.
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Tarja, welcome bac. I know the background sucks but I was in a hurry and a free member doesn't have a whole lot to choose from
Joe
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