I'm searching for the perfect toy
the one she'll love the most.
The one that will bring her lots of joy
and a good excuse to boast.
The one toy she'll treasure all her life,
and love with all her heart.
The one toy that will end her strife
but just where should I start?
Should I start at the mall
or mabye at the Best-buy?
Should I go to only one store
or should I search them all?
How will I know when I find it,
just wich toy is the best?
I think I'll sit and think for a bit
before I begin my quest.
It is hard to find the perfect toy
I must do this very well
because if on Christmas, she doesen't get enough joy
than she will know there is no Santa, I can tell.
A contest entry
- I'm Searching for the Perfect Toy... by Melodies.
600 points, ended November 30, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that;'s sad!
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Excellent
What a fantastic poem.
We all need to make sure the children are happy at Christmas time.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
*S* Cynthia
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well done great poem just one typo i noticed in second last stanza ..a missing 'h' in which >>just wich toy is the best?
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I am getting all into the idea of going shopping...
Your poem makes me feel in the shopping mood. 
I wish we could go shopping together because I need help to find the perfect something for a certain person and I can tell from your poem that you would be a fab shopper. 
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Wonderful
Very well written. Best of luck in the contest.
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