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walk of love

i walk down the isle
dressed in black
wait for a while
like a train down a track
then enters my love
with a dress so pale
fit like a glove
fallowed by a veil
music so sweet
theres no way to hide
walk so neat
almost a glide
words of a bond
no one can break
touch of a wand
her hand i will take
slide of a ring
two word of woo
almost a sing
we say "I do"

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  • Whyitt U
    December 7, 2007

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    This really has a pretty good flow to it and a wonderful message....but it doesn't really make me feel good, but I can see how it would make you and many others feel good.

    Wyattxxx