[imperfection never looked this beautiful]
as i grasped insecurity from the edge
glass hearts rupture spleens
& plastic stars decorate souls with glitter
midnight is crying for redemption -
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it's only another lost cause
caught between the pages
of a storybook never published
& her grave speaks to her
as if she was just another ghost
[medication can't even help it]
& those starlight cuts are deeper than they seem
♥
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this is my favorite of all your poems
it's so beautiful
so much imagery
and just absolutely and completely AMAZING
well no, it's more. but there aren't words that can really do this beauty justice
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This is so pretty =]
wowa
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that was awesome..........like i said be4 you rock!!!!
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thank you.
a few imbeciles have been coming here just to bash my work trying to prove to me that i suck just because i said some 11 year old wasn't very good at writing. they obviously think i'm stupid but i keep putting them on ignore. they do not give very good critiques so i don't really care. if they were DECENT critiques that simply tell me what to change instead of saying that i sucked, i wouldn't have cared.
but yeah it's good to have people like you on this site who are honest. -
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oooohhh Fuck those EMO douche-Bags that are like in their 12's....they are too fresh for there own liking......You probably got something they don't have.....-SO FLAUNT IT LIKE A BITCH!!!!!
{{{{{don't listen to ha8ers}}}}}
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they are actually 18-20, and they did it because i made a comment to one of their cousins, one of them is a cousin of this person trying to have people gang up on me lol. even tried to get admin to delete my account.
funny.
and i don't listen to them, it's kind of funny they care. everyone in real life, even my past teachers tell me i'm too good not to be famous....but just don't want to just be famous. i want my words to be heard that's all.
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