When you touch my skin with light graceful strokes i shiver with goose bumps and butterfly getters. When you hold me close in your loving way I loose all coldness and melt away in your arms. Just being with you makes my heart skip, unreal the happiness you bring
(course)
Every breath I take
My lips sigh your name
Every second I'm awake
My thoughts are of you
Every time I sleep
My dreams are of you
Running into your arms, the safty and security in your tight loving arms, I feel you will never let me fall. Looking into your eyes, I see love and kindness never failing to show your emotions, I feel you will never break my heart
(course)
Every breath I take
My lips sigh your name
Every second I'm awake
My thoughts are of you
Every time I sleep
My dreams are of you
(I miss you when we're apart)
on that morning
when we are together
I know, we'll never be apart
I can't await the day, when I fall asleep, you'll be right there laying next to me. Holding close, all snuggled tight, never worrying about the boogyman fright. no more what others say, its just you and me babe, and the world below
(course)
Every breath I take
My lips sigh your name
Every second I'm awake
My thoughts are of you
Every time I sleep
My dreams are of you
Every breath I take
Every second I'm awake
Every time I sleep
Every move I make (...I'm missing you baby)
Every Breath I take
Every scond I'm awake
Every time I sleep
Every move I make (...Can't seem to live with out you)
Missing you until the day,
I can hold you in my arms again
I'll never let go
Cause that's the day I'm whole again
Baby, just want you to know, your the breath I take and the heart that beats within me, cause baby, I Love You
Author notes
3) "I'm sorry I'm so dependent on you.
You are my life though.
I can't imagine a future without you.
I don't want a future if you're not in"
In a list
A contest entry
- Got A Crush On A Pretty Pistol [[+Round One+]] by brittany.geeze.
360 points, ended January 23, 2008, 16 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes by Lola Green.
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Comments
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this song will most defenitely be a hit. I really loved the course where you explain how much of your core is missing this person. Hope to read allot more of your work thank you so much for entering this contest! We wish you all the best.
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ok this is a lovely write, but the background makes it difficult to read and ones to appreciate what you are saying. look at some of other poets, and see, colors and pictures, but you must be able to read the words, for that is primarfy important.OK? always write what you feel.







