My heart is a mirror that you broke.
It showed what you didn't want to see.
It showed what you didn't want to be.
You have broke my heart, to many times.
For it to love ever again.
That is what I thought that day.
That day when all life was hell.
You have broken my heart, to many times.
Never again will it be whole.
This is what I think today.
This day that I am afraid.
I am afraid that you will break it again.
I am afraid I will love you again.
A contest entry
- What is your heart? by tara wilson.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2007, 36 entries
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Comments
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oh wow good poem, but you need to change the background, i'm basically having a seizure haha
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oh wow.
I know that feeling. Too well.
Warmest,
Mylee -
"My heart is a mirror that you broke."
I think this is such a great idea - I would have liked to have seen more imagery, and this expanded even more, you have some spelling mistakes as well, to - too...thanks so much for entering my contest..
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You have penned such a heartfelt poem. I think we all feel this way about someone we love even though they keep hurting us. The heart wants what the heart wants. Sometimes its not the best thing for us. But no one said love was easy. I do hope you find a lasting love to make you happy. You take care, Sandy
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I like this. I like the questioning and the contradiction between wanting someone and being afraid that person will hurt you again. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
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I've extended the contest by a week so you have lots of time
Let me know if you need more.
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are you open to suggestions?
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A love that little twist at the end. "I am afraid I will love you again." -That's a perfect way to end this poem. Bravo to you. This is really good, so good luck in the contest. Best wishes.
Cheers
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