Your hurting me
and you don't even notice
i love you
and you don't even care
this pain is killing me
but you don't think i give a dam
you think that i don't care
well i do because my love for you hasn't died
so what i have someone else
i love you more than him
just say the word
and i will be done with him
A contest entry
- Quckie-I Love You With All My Little Black Heart by Lady Nightshade.
600 points, ended January 21, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ***********Okay here it is************ 5 choices**********Enter If you Dare******* by MyMudPies.
450 points, ended January 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Okay, good write to start but you need to go back and give me an option number...its in the rules
fix this you have plenty of time, I don't DQ so please fix this,
stephanie
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