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Four red roses

I’ve always thought
That the first time, I’d give away a red rose
Were to tell someone that he made me happy
Made me believe in love and life

I never thought,
That this first rose,
Would be put on your grave,
And made me doubt
In everything.

A young girl
Loved and lost
I can’t believe that
“This was meant to be”
It wasn’t

You were too young
And had already lost
Too much.

Nothing will ever be the same
Without you here
We will be lost
And something will always
Be missing.

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  • ShinyBUBBLESxo
    December 10, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    I may be young, but I know about losing people close to me. I've lost friends and family from car crashes, cancer, suicide, and everything in between. I love this poem, it's sad, but beautiful and touching. Keep up the good work!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    Very deep and sad piece. If this is true for you,
    I am so sorry about your loss. A lot of emotion
    and great imagery here. Thanks a lot for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826