If only he knew
that I was dying inside.
Some day, some time,
he'll know the emotions I hide.
I was 15 at the time
when he took advantage of me.
I kept saying no
so he got rid of me.
The next day he ignored me
and at night I was crying hard.
All because he tore a piece of my heart
and it became a shard.
Sometimes I wonder
if he really cared at all.
I guess he really doesn't
as I begin to fall.
I'm dying inside
all be cause of him.
And now my tears
are at the brim.
I wanted to shout at him
I wanted to erase the memory.
But that can't do
we were never meant to be.
Am I doomed to suffer
this lie?
Does the memory of him
make me want to cry?
One day he'll see
that he killed me inside
Then he'll finally ask him self
"Why did she do suicide?"
A contest entry
- What Are You Hiding? by LunaAmara.
525 points, ended December 8, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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this is awesome. so full of emotion...it's so deep...
i pray to god you don't actually want to commit suicide--though i understand the feelings. you have talent.
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Wow, this is pretty deep and sad.
It's terrible when someone does something
like this to another person. Great job
here and good luck to you with it in the
contest! Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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