Dont be afraid to love
For fear of heart ache
(Hearts Mend)
Dont be afraid to try
For fear of failure
(Practice makes perfect)
Dont be afraid to dream
For fear of dissapointment
(Life is what you make it)
&&& Never be afraid of doing something you desire
For fear it might go wrong
(You may be suprised)
Have faith in yourself and make those dreams reality...
Author notes
Okay so it dont ryhme, but i hope you like it anyway.
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
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Comments
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A beautiful write about reaching out to reach our highest potential in life.
An encouraging and uplifting poem, thank you for sharing.
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your reallyyy good. i totally love it. Check some of mine out you might like them...
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A very uplifting and encouraging write Thank you for entering my contest
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Haven't seen that construction, but it dang well works.
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i like this... words of wisdon for sure.
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a lot of provoking thought in these words...
I like your free verse, and it does not need rhyme, as you say, but you do have expression and a flowing rhythm. The repeated from adds to the overall feeling of the poem.
You have also spent time with your ideas, which you have expressed in a form which is succinct and meaningful.
dissapointment = disappointment. suprised = surprised
I would suggest the use of an apostrophe in dont to make don't as it is such an important word in this poem.
If we all lived by the messages of your poem, the world would be a lot stronger and better place in which to live. Your words are invigorating.
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I like this.
It does not matter if it rhymes and this is pretty good advice I must say. I echo the sentiment. -
I love the way you have set this up, it has a wonderful message...faith, sometimes we all forget to have, especially when we need it most. Nice write, thanks for sharing. Good Luck!
Wyattxxx
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