Fireflies
Like winking stars in a dark upside down . . .
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Just thinking . . . .
Just a short piece--personal . . .
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Hello there. I like this piece very much. It is very evocative.
It would work really well as a haiku:
fireflies --
winking stars upside down
in the dark
Have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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Sorry it took so long to respond!
Thanks, BJ. I like how you turned this into a haiku. Hope you're having a great day too!--Kelly
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Never heard that one before. Its true they are like stars upside down.
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Thank you so much, Reese! I'm glad you like my description of how I view fireflies.
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kool
I know i have those day to
but you could add:
Buzzing around to finish this lit sky
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Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed my little write. My ever-present struggle with brevity. Lol.
I enjoy your take on this world, life, love and more. Will be reading much more of you.
Thank you again . . .
Kelly
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Don't think I have ever seen a firefly except in movies and on tv. Think it would be marvelous to have them all around you at night and seeing them flit here and there. Interesting look at them in these two lines.
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perfect
Thanks for the comment! I don't get around much on this site. I signed up to find out if there really were any poeple who could write at least decent poetry. And I was pretty disappointed at first. But eventually I was able to find a few people, like yourself, who weren't just shooting around in the dark. Thanks for giving me hope for the world! -
Think more!
Think more! Then write more like this one; I like short ones, and this was/is a good one.
Damon
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I love this image.
always was fascinated by fireflies, and this is just beautiful.
I saw the sky
and i saw stars too
which hold special meaning for me these days.
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Im glad your thinking again...
Sometimes it takes a thought of two and the waves of creativity begin to flow again.
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