Freedom is his spirit
yet the heart of this beast,
is gentle and giving
wanting so much to please.
As a small child sleeping
thoughts of him filled my dreams.
I am now being blessed,
By this vision I see
Running wild like the wind
on this shore by the sea,
quick hooves pounding sand,
what a joy to be free.
Our own special bonding
touches deep within my soul.
The pure essense of love
as such grace I behold.
Author notes
Option #1 ~ Picture Prompt ~ Horses
A contest entry
- My Second Contest - Horses, Colour and Music! by cirque du soleil.
600 points, ended December 2, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice
I like your poem very much. I have that picture of the horse to, I googled horses one day and thought it such a pretty picture that I saved a copy. I would love to have an actual photo on my wall.
Lovely poem.
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Very lovely nice rhyme and rhythm here. A poem of
beauty beholding beauty.
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this is beautiful i love it. The picture is awesome to Congratulations on the Honorable mention trophy
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Very Good
Love the opening words of this
The picture is lovely as well
I love the vision of a horse in motion
Very nice verse you have made here
Rick -
Freedom is his spirit
yet the heart of this beast,
is gentle and giving
wanting so much to please.
Beautiful opening words
I love the vision of a horse in motion
Just beautiful, great picture
I have words on this
Rick
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I can see your heart rising as the goose bumps race. Vison clear words sparse, nicely turned vision of a dream come real.
Love, Tom B.
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Oh yea! This is an amazing and wonderful image. I love the slant rhyme giving it the flow and motion. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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I think we all wish for the ability to be this free and wild with no fears of reprocussions from our own inhibitions!!! This was a magnificent piece and a lovely tribute to such a graceful animal! Good luck in the contest.....
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i love this...good work
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This is a lovely prompt you chose and you captured the spirit of this black beauty with your pen. Wild and free we see visions in our mind of this and the wind races past us. There is a special bonding here and I loved reading this. Thank you for sharing with me and good luck in the contest. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥
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