You spend your time tending your farm
living from the land,
I know it's a way of life
not just a job, I understand
So
Let me fill a bubble bath
to help ease your weary limbs,
I can light some jasmine candles
and cater to all your whims.
Let me massage your body
feel the power of my palm
C'mon baby, just lay back
I have oils to soothe and calm
Let the warmth of friendship
wash away you fears,
Close the curtains of regret...
let love dry your tears,
Author notes
A work in progress...
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations!
I can see why this won Gold!
Well done!
Maureen
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This is exactly what I wanted!! This makes me feel good...and warm, and considering the high temp. here today is 10 below and the low tonight is supposed to be 25 below, that is a very good thing. Thanks so much for sharing and personalizing it enough to make ME feel good...well done. Good Luck!!
Wyattxxx
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