To see this woman try to sweep,
pain and cobwebs within her deep.
Her mind adrift in deepest thought,
bears the cost in pain it brought.
Seeing a woman torn apart,
I'm but a muse with broken heart.
Her broken wings won't let her soar,
beyond the clouds in blue azure.
She tries to smile does quite well,
dark glasses hide red eyes that swell.
All by herself she tries to cope,
with rhyme and verse looks for hope.
Yes I am her and she is me,
sometimes we tend to disagree.
She calls on me to fill a need,
to mend her heart or let it bleed.
From day to day I am her muse,
bring words of love, life and abuse.
I let her shed her tears through me,
she writes to let the sorrow free.
Sits wonders anticipating,
while life becomes complicating.
I'll always be a thought away,
when she calls on me night or day.
Author notes
This was the muse of the day. Sometimes she has a mind of her own!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- Musing Muses by minto.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is an amazing write which holds soo much within it and is powerfully written. i love it well done and best of luck
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Beautiful Sandy
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I love your muse and I am jealous of your muse at the same time
Best of luck to you in the contest
Stay safe
Much love to you
~Manda
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Forgot to applaud you...so overwhelmed with the poem!
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Always Beautiful!
Yes how true of you..Arms open, hands extended, an ear to hear, her knees are bended. In prayer for those who like her too, have needs to share, and you are there...Beautiful! Always Beautiful -
hi my lovely auntie
Restless days will come and go in everyone's life, but they won't stay. Their nature is transient.
Love you
Shahrzad
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Oh brilliantly written.Thankyou for following all of the rules and entering my contest. Good luck to you!
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This is a Great Poem I really enjoyed it very deep lots of emotion I like the rythem and flow!!
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I appreciate your nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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this flows beautifully, but it is so sad.
great write.
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A lovely comment. Thank you for stopping by. Have a nice weekend. Take care, Sandy
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Most beautiful description of the muse I believe I have ever seen. Deep insight and smooth transition of how your muse is separate but still a part of you. Good rhyme scheme and flow. The first stanza with the imagery of cobwebs is my favorite part. Kudos!
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Little Woman Of Tears
How so often does this seem.
It is her njghtmares instead of her dreams.
The pain a woman often endures,
Being a woman is not aneasy thing.
I hope in heaven,
Is where the bells ring.
When a woman cries.
Then again when she passes by.
Passing by up into the sky.
Where she is met with her angel friends.
The take the age and worry lines.
They are are not her penance lines.
The when she meedt God face to face.
They all turn to lines of grace.
So when you feel so low and almost out.
God gives Mothers clout.
Clout to remove those who make her feel doubt.
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Beautiful Comment
Good morning my dear friend. Always a pleasure to read your thoughtful comments. It is so nice to have you as a friend. You are a beam of light on this site. You have a wonderful weekend and thank you from keeping that mean purple sun at away.
Always, Sandy
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eloquently written
only need one correction.. in the second stanza third line the word sore should be soar.. unless you mesnt it to be that wa -
Charming!
I hope that your thoughts are not always in such need of repair...Your muse takes care of you well. Good luck in the contest! -
Very Elegant
This piece was well written and is down right elegant. It conveys the feeling very well along with a bit og imagery. It's not my normal type of read but I like it anyway. Thank you. -
Beautiful
Awesome Sandy, flow beautifully and so very well expressed. Amazing what one can see when they step outside of themself. Anquish yet still hopeful.
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Lovely Comment
Good morning June. Your comments are always so nice to read. They are always uplifting too. I love your positive attitude. Don't ever lose it. You take care my dear friend. Always, Sandy
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This was so sad but i really understand this poem as a woman in the same shape, how elegantly you told your story and phrased this pain you have felt.
Sandy you are amazing.
Love
~Lisa~
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Great Comment
Thank you Lisa, I appreciate the lovely comment. You have a nice weekend. Take care, Sandy
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