I know your day is dark and gloomy.
Allow me to take you by the hand and show you the sun.
Let me wipe your tears away and replace it with a smile.
Take my hand and I will show you all that is good, all that is great.
Allow me to sing a song that will take you back in time.
To the days when all was well.
Let me show you that your bad nights will be followed by a better day.
Allow me to do this for my friend.
Author notes
I don't know. I wrote this cause someone needed to be cheered up.
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Good write and such care
It takes little to help someone in need and the little is yourself to stop and reach out and take anothers hand and show them they arent ever alone
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This is simple and sweet. Has a real nice sentiment to it...a joy to read! Good Luck!
Wyatt
xxx
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BEAUTIFUL
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