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Ignorance doused in make up

You're winding me up
No seriously, it's not a big deal in this school
See that guy walking in with the big hair, he does it
Who? Charlie?
Yeah, I think he's stoned right now
Oh my God
(The girl turns away)
Hey man there's no reason to be afraid, i'm just stoned
(The big hair jumps onto the tallest part of a chair and balancing there shouts)
Give me a hug!
(the girl screams)

Little rabbit, staring into the oncoming lights
Who ever said ignorance was bliss?

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  • Teena-Faerie
    June 8, 2008
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    very well written.

    I love this, the title is clever, and so is the message behind the poem.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 29, 2007

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    Wow

    Knowing the background to this Charlie this etches a good write.
    The title is amazing hun good choice x
    Who ever said ignorance is bliss... so true a sentence made.
    All you do now hun I move on, hold your head up high and prove them all wrong

    Julie xxx


  • just-a-gurl
    November 29, 2007

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    this got me and...im not quite sure why...lol

    i enjoyed the visuals most definately and the title grabbed my attention

    i am not afraid