Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

The kiss burns in his heart, but the old man holds to his former idea

Bring me my chains; wrap them 'round my neck, dear,
And pull me up tight into your open arms.
There's nothing seems new after a little death, dear.
And if the Sun would burn down
We'd be alone in this storm.

Author notes

Title taken from Dostoevsky's The Brothers Karamazov

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Eruvande Almare
    December 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Ahh yes, I love how you can say so much in a few short lines. It's gripping, captivation, it takes the reader in its claw and doesn't let go. I had to go back and read it again, you're amazing! A romance with death I say and it's beautiful! Keep up the fantastic writing dear, I love it!

    ~Elizabeth~