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The World is a Dangerous Place

The world is a dangerous place to live; not because of the people who are evil, but because of the people who don't do anything about it.
  -Albert Einstein-

Walkin' down the street
Hard day at the factory
Pulled two shifts
Nothing doesn't hurt
Just want to get home
Have a smoke and a meal
And get to bed with Marie
What's that yell
Hear a cry
A moan
Peers into an alley
Sees a boy
Beaten and battered
A man is thrashing the body of the boy
The man is a soldier
What could the boy have done
"I'll teach you"
Said the soldier
The accent was very think
The man pulled hand back
And slammed it forward to the boy
The boy fell
And a tooth spilled from his mouth with blood
Horrified and shocked
Scared and sympathetic
Help
What to do
Surely the boy was innocent
Or at least what was done
Is not worthy of such a merciless beating
After contemplating the situation
Walks on
Walks home
Doesn't listen to the cries
Doesn't listen to the moans Smoke, that's what is needed
A smoke

 

 

The world is a dangerous place...

-The Author- 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 1, 2007
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    Quite an impressive take here and yes immagery is remarkable especially the thought is very effective...well done..a heartfelt write revealing the depth of the heart..and the heart is once again in great distress....and this has come here with your strong words..well done my friend....


  • Felissa
    November 30, 2007

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    I actually didn't picture him as a Nazi...just as a soldier with a weird accent .
    But wow. This is quite eye-opening. People just let things go that shouldn't happen a lot. They don't do anything about it because they don't think they can, when in reality they could actually save somebody.
    Not that I'm not guilty of it from time to time. Most people are.
    Thanks for posting this.
    Peace, love, and walruses,
    ~_^Lumina


  • just-a-gurl
    November 29, 2007
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    funny, this write in whole made me think of a german film but i cant remember much about it..

    i agree whole heartedly with einstein...and you

    people imagine me as a smoker... alas, i cant stand it- besides i get all the second hand i need from my ears