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Addicted to You

My addiction is you,
your body your heart,
im dependent on you,
make a clean start.

Im hooked on you,
and your sweet kiss,
i really need you,
our wonderland bliss.

I long for you,
your gentle touch,
im missing you,
i need you so much.

My passion is you,
your beautiful eyes,
i cant get over you,
and my tear that cries.

My life is you,
when you hold me tight,
i'll always love you,
and i know this is right.







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  • kelbornro
    January 21, 2008

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    very simple but very good...me likee and i know the feeling.....hmmm carre....sorry drifted off....well done on an amazing write

    keep writing

    kelbornro


  • pink cats fly
    November 30, 2007
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    aw this is so sweet and full of love, really good write


  • red roses
    November 30, 2007

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    i like this it is short but sweet. have a good weekend text me if you get bored on monday. beautiful poem. see you later


  • Kiara Marie
    November 29, 2007
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    Very simple

    I love the message in this.I love it down to the last line