You gave me the gift of life.
You feed me well to build my strength.
you taught me how to walk and talk.
You guide me in your own way.
My love for you grows more day by day.
You taught me values that are honest and true.
You taught me how to read and write.
You are always there in my dreams at night.
Love you lots although sometimes I fight.
My love for you grows more day by day.
You take time to listen,
You help me grow to understand.
You give me hugs and take my hand.
You protect me when I come to harm.
You cherish me with lots of charm.
My love for you grows more day by day
A contest entry
- Your Best Pre-write of 2007 by Metaphorist.
900 points, ended January 4, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice warm poeming of love to a good friend!! Great dedication hun xx
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This is very beautiful. A sweet and warming poem. I loved it. Nicely done.
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First impression: a typo in the title is always a bad sign. Also, please capitalize the “I”’s in stanzas two and three. This is sweet and touching, but not terribly creative or memorable.
Thanks for entering. Good luck in my contest and in the New Year! -
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