am the goody and you both the baddy,
I was never loved by my mummy and daddy,
You both had your selfish reasons,
Your poor baby suddenly went out of season.
Just one night you spent out of passion,
Such a shame that a baby had to happen,
Hey here I was but you didn’t care,
When I needed love you wasn’t there.
Mum I am glad you died,
When I found out I never even cried,
Dad you were a waste of space.
Something that was so easy to erase.
You both deserve each other,
Underneath deaths cover,
You brought me into this cruel world,
A helpless & scared baby girl.
But you both decided to turn your back,
It seems in loving & consideration you lacked,
I write this to let you both know,
That until I die I will hate you both so.
Thanks Mum and thanks Dad,
I just hope that you are now glad,
One of you is dead the other god knows where,
All my love from the daughter that no longer cares.
A contest entry
- Make your pain mine... by Sticks-And-Stones.
650 points, ended December 3, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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that was so freaking amazing i am speachless. i mean damn that was just an amazning poem. awesome write.,
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Very good
Your words are well chosen and convey a meaning that flows smoothly into the next line of thought. A stunning and dramatic way to acknowledge your pain. Good word choices attacking the reader with their impact. The message is clear and truly expressed with conviction gleaned from years of resentment,fear and pain.
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Wow. I don't know what to say about this poem... it's good. I like it... but it leaves me speechless. Great job!
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