I take the subway
home
she waits for me there
started primping
at 7:00 this morning
still primping
figuring if she does enough
I will notice something
as I undo it all in a bull's rush
to hide in her five o'clock shadow
Author notes
I have a beard
In a list
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out of the few which i have read (of yours), i like this best.
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i know you have a beard...
and this is very good, Allan
Your humor is outstanding, as
always...Love, Lane
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lmao!
OH wonderful!
you've taken this in a direction I did not expect, but it's fantastic!
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LOLOL....very clever! It takes me about 5 minutes
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O.o
Ok, that's weird. It works though. -
It takes me at least 16 hours to look presentable. Thankyou for takeing me away from the circus; it was such a hard job being the bearded lady.
Love,
Amera♥
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I did not say where you shaved. But, I did say I wanted to hide there.
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