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Always be Mine

We could make magic
Just trust in me
Fireworks in our skies
For just you and I to see

In your hand you'll hold a locket
Engraved with your name and mine
Baring the burden of a rocket
So all our dreams we can find

Oh I'm as serious as train off tracks
I'll kiss to fill your heart's deep cracks
I'm tangled as I knit for you
Let me be that someone new

Could you imagine if I was Near?
I can't help but want you here
I'll tell you that I'm into you
Let you know that I'll be true
If only you'd come back to me
and fully just believe in we

I'll make it all happen
Can you listen to me?
I'll sing you that song
From Her then to He

With words written bravely
a heart on the line
I hope that you'll save me
and always be mine

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  • forgotten hopes
    January 28, 2008

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    beautiful

    some unusual imagery and metaphors used here
    i love it it's so pretty and beautiful (which is rare for me to enjoy) a very nice write

    xx


  • Laken
    January 14, 2008
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    Beautiful....