As I hear everything,
he's doing now.
I wish i could be there,
To clear everything up.
If I could only save him,
from the mistakes he's making.
Maybe things could,
be different.
Maybe I could save him,
he's falling father down.
I just want to hold him,
and say everything gonna be alright.
As tears stream down my face,
I realize he's already gone.
To far away for me to save him.
I never thought it would happen,
never thought I could lose my best friend.
We live two separate lives,
so far away since we were lovers.
Care free only needing each other,
days I'll never have back.
A contest entry
- The Truth Is Out There… by BluRosePoet8488.
1000 points, ended December 5, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Good. Sometimes we lose friends. it happens. Stay strong.
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i think this one of your best writes. I cleary understood it, defiantly people can relate to. You're very talented, it was also a good piece too.
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Very well done. I like the message this carries. keep the ink flowing and good luck. Thanks for entering.
~Donna~
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