Come along the blessed sorrow,
Come along the pain.
Come along and bring tommorow.
Come along and reign.
Come along and seize the day.
Come along and enjoy.
Come along and lead the way.
Come along and don't be coy.
Come along with me.
Come along and bring your fear.
Come along and see.
Come along for the end draws near.
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Your poem is great! The poem is almost like a true American blues or country song. It has a very pastoral feel to the repetition on the lines. Walt Whitman style is a lot of ways. He is a great American poet who also had that pastoral feel to his poems. I can see the landscape before my eyes. Maybe you could keep this poem and then copy it and expand the poem and tell a subtle story. Good job pen on!
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a good poem not worhyt a clap seeing as though you deemed my poem a one so this can not rate with that and get equal
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Very entertaining, uplifting, and just plain fun! Hope you had as much fun writing this poem as I did reading it!
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