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Gypsy night

As the sun sets
the wind doth blow
A blood red moon arises
bats begin their nightly flight
a mournful screech echoes across the marsh
sending chills up and down your spine
in the distant a howl picks up into a chorus
following the rhythm of the Gypsy's fiddle
on through the night she plays
sorrow in every note
a wailing sound
till morning
light

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  • Denierim
    December 2, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery in this one and I like the Gypsy feel to this poem too. I'm greatly interested of the Gypsy life and have read about it a lot and I like the images this poem brought to me about all that, and your wording was so beautiful in their dark nature. I could imagine the sad song she was playing too and that's a wonderful things coming from words.

    Beautiful, beautiful work with this one and thanks for sharing this poem with us!