It's that time of year.
Once again,
I don't have cheer.
Once again,
My heart is too sore.
Once again,
I can't take any more.
I don't want to be alone.
Once again,
I am alone
Every year, on this day.
I cry myself to sleep.
Every year, on this day.
These thoughts , do I keep
Once again,
Tears role down my cheeks.
Once again,
From me, my pain leeks.
Once again,
I just can't make it.
Once again,
I just won't take it.
Author notes
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I love the repetition. Great expression of your feelings. However,
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This is sad. I can't count how many times I've felt like this.
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Wow, I like this and I can relate. I makes me think about what happened to you and why you feel this way. Great job, and good luck!
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Sad Write~~~~
Everything rhymed well, but it is so sad. They say, this time of year, some people have more sadness, than glad. I certainly Pray' that things get better for you...'God Bless You'...Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo...
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