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Still The Same

This town is still the same without you
But I'm not
And don't tell me that you're never coming back
You know I'm not ready
You know I can't accept that
I need you in my life

This town is fine without you
But I'm not
Sometimes when it's quiet
If I close my eyes and think hard enough
I can feel you
I can feel your body pressed into mine
And I'm warm
Your weight against mine and soft breathing
I miss you
When are you coming home?

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  • Puppet
    November 30, 2007

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    this is a well written poem. I like this style more than your old one. You're becoming a better writer. what's all this for