An eternal chill within me
Feeds the beast of descension
The fire is burning brighter
I can feel it slice my veins
The want of more destruction
The pleasure of me bleeding
The desire to feel it leave me
And I'm caught up in this rush
I feel this sickness within me
It makes me feel so alive
It's only the end of the suffering
I'm caught up in this rush
I can see the spiral
Going nowhere fast
Lost in endless ecstacy
I need the feeling to last
I'm caught up in this rush
Author notes
option 2.
A contest entry
- I focus on the pain, the only thing that's real... by Avalanche.Echo.
450 points, ended December 8, 2007, 10 entries
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owch.
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wow i really like this
i like the way it flows and i like the format
great write!
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All too familiar. This was really good, and I can relate well.
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