the light you see far away
a reason why i should carry away
take some time, meditate and stay
seek for identity don't let it go away
be yourself better sit and pray
all the worries will soon fly away
when lost from truth
enter and face it
treat it some how smooth
and never play with it
rainstorm on the edge
let go and rest
sleep under the nest
and a rainbow will come next
lonelyness is temporary
there's no one who deserves my company
take time for yourself
and work on your inner-self.
Author notes
Written October 25th, 2003
A contest entry
- October New Members- "Chin Up" Poetry Contest - Hosted by The AllPoetry Greeter Staff by CookieZeal.
300 points, ended November 3, 2003, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"lonelyness is temporary
there's no one who deserves my company
take time for yourself
and work on your inner-self."
this is a beautifully inspirational write...keep writing and good luck and welcome to AP
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Yes please consider re-entering by following the set criteria - there is still time.
Your poem has merit but in order to be considered must met the criteria.
~Von~ -
Dear poet please read the contest critera and repost this, it is well written but has not followed all the rules of the contest....
Peace be with & blessed be;
shaggy wolf
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