Words will never speak loud enough,
what I need my heart to say.
But it's you that keeps it's beat
from worlds so far away.
I see what lies inside your soul,
beauty beyond the skin.
Lost I'd be without you now,
for you've taken my heart in.
You've held my spirit, oh so close
and captured both my good and bad.
If not for your golden warmth,
I'd be left alone and sad.
An angel in my heart, you've been;
no other way I wish it to be.
Your beauty goes beyond the skin,
it's just so plain to see.
And when I say I love you
no truer words I say.
For in my heart you will remain
until my dying day.
Author notes
I asked you if you liked me, you said no. I asked you if I was pretty, you said no. I asked you if i was in your heart, you said no. I asked you if you would cry if I walked away, you said no. So I walked away... you grabbed my arm and said... I don't like you, I love you... You're not pretty, you're beautiful... You're not in my heart, you are my heart...And I wouldn't cry if you walked away, I would die... I love you....Unknown
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A contest entry
- I Love You... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 8, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And when I say I love you
no truer words I say.
For in my heart you will remain
until my dying day.
This is truely a heart warming description of the heart where you defined the story of the love in melodious words ..this is a sweet poem touching the sentiments of the true lover here descrining the scanario of the loveful heart..I love this piece..you did a wonderful job here..thanks for sharing this write..well done... -
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Thank you for the wonderful comment and the HM. I much enjoyed writing this piece.
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Third stanza is my very favorite but this entire piece speaks love, like the kiss of the butterfly, barely felt upon the skin, but never forgotten in the heart...gold from me, but I am not the contest owner. Best of luck. Peace, Rhonda
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Well Done
THis should be a gold winner,so well written and full of emotion, it speaks to the heart of the reader, great job, Blessings John
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