Through the breeze's misty whispers
and the trees blowing their doubts
a dream passes [flies] by
so fast not every soul can catch it
but one heart holds the power [magnetic]
strong enough to draw the desire,
the ambition, and hold it close
afraid that if they let go
-it
will
disappear-
Author notes
off of the prompt: "fly"
A contest entry
- Quickie - 10 Entries - Random Prompt by Ryno.
300 points, ended November 28, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is good, mee hearts!
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Wow
Love how you interpreted dreams...Wonderful..Congrats on the gold!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
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I loved this and its resemblance on humanity. We are all different people who attract certain dreams.... what a great take on the poem. Beautiful too. Thank-you for the entry.
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Fly
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