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[ These eyes see all ]

These eyes see all
everything thats going on
right in front of them
all they see is pain,suffering,lies
but not one time have they cryed
not once
but they do see others
that cry all the time
they do feel the pain
that everyone else feels
but she will not brake
and let everyone know
that they have been lying
to everyone,every soul,every person
they act like everythings just fine
and nothing is worng
but once no ones there to see
they shed them tears
of pain and suffering
and all because of those lies

Author notes

its ummm 4 the eye one lol sorri=P

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  • seasonsoflove
    December 13, 2007
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    "but she will not brake
    and let everyone know
    that they have been lying
    to everyone,every soul,every person"
    reminds me of me kinda... only the people closest to me really see anything im feeling... anyway, great job and best of luck in this contest!
    ~rocklover91