Her soft eyes
melted into me
like rock in scotch
and as I stirred
her with my finger
mixed emotions
blended in
in uttered want.
Time had made
her sour mash
turn sweet
and uninhibited.
Author notes
Damn... Now I need a drink!
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Ok, I agree...need a drink now!
There is an underlying sensuality to this piece that is raw yet almost innocently sweet.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
Funny. Its very sensual...yet makes ME wanna have a drink too!! Awesome write!
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