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Perfect Relapse

I'm seeing the rainbows;
The eminate from the shards of glass that you left behind.

[[I can hardly breathe]]
My lungs are collapsing;
[[I can hardly see]]
My vision is blurring again;
[[I'm relapsing]]
Was breaking my heart absolutly necessary?

[[I'm bleeding glitter and crying a silent requiem; am I perfect yet?]]

If perfection means regurgitating anything but glitter;
I'm prepared to admit I don't quite understand that concept...
Because [[obviously]] I'm lying on the finest gurney
Paying for [our] mistakes; I'm begging for the end;
And now, so are you.

[[Sweetie, hearts can't beat if they're broken.]]

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  • whiterabbit.
    December 4, 2007
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    I like this sweetie.
    There's really a lot of emotion here. Thanks for entering.


  • punk-rising
    November 30, 2007
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    okay sorry about the last comment my bad tee-hee anyways i loved your poem!!!stars falling random