"But the water flows! Does it not?"
"It does, it does, however the wind also blows."
"But the wheels are there to hold their ground."
"Once again this is true, but 'lost twice, once founnd'"
"I see, how is it that the names no longer speak?"
"This is reserved for the humble, neigh... the meek."
"Well, the time has come... trudge onward I must!"
"Go forth now, Ashes to ashes, dust to dust."
A contest entry
- Think Abstract by Jfd.
600 points, ended November 29, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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excellent(sic)!!!!marvellous(sic)!!!!!wonderful(sic)!!!!and most important....ACROSTIC TO THE BONE!!! well done jesusloving byron!!!i hope you executed a couple of sermons (sic) for me today(sic).here in big apple (sic) it's been raining big apples since yesterday..people left their umbrellas home and move around holding police shields to protect their heads..do you think the Devil's Hour has come?Apocalypse itself?oh no... Thank Goodness We Have your Acrostic Poetry To Cheer us up(sic)!Dust to Lust (sic)!
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I'm not usually a big fan of rhyme, however you executed this well....it didn't distract me....some nice ideas in there too, I don't know if I like the format of it (being entirely in quotes) but it wasn't bad at all....thank you for entering!
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